Pillow Talk

[roxy-palace.livejournal.com]

I'm kind of embarrassed to be asking for this, but I'm looking for Mcshep Fic where the boys encourage eachother and direct eachother during sex in a gentle, smokingly hot kind of way.  It's kind of a kink and it's kind of specific, but it's always cool when they tell eachother what they're going to do..and then, you know ...do it.  Also, when they ask if the other likes it, wants more, wants it harder.  That kind of thing.  I'm also keen for the encouraging, directing kind of thing too.  

I would give examples, but I'm already scarlet with shame as it is...so I just hope you'll come up with some stuff and I can slink back under the kinky rock from whence I came.  

Just to recap, McShep please, but if the chit chat is good i'll read anything.  Only slash.  Happy endings prefered.  Pillow talk doesn't have to be the central theme, but a good bit of verbal filth is a must.

Thanks in advance!

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[dossier.livejournal.com]

sardonicsmiley - shook me all night long (http://sardonicsmiley.livejournal.com/43049.html)

Verbal filth, personified.

[roxy-palace.livejournal.com]

Thank you. Thank you very, very much:)

[roxy-palace.livejournal.com]

Did I say thank you? I meant "Oh holy jesus! You're a freakin' genius! This is exactly what I wanted! Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" only louder and with more jumping up and down...

[folavril.livejournal.com]

Try this (lots & lots of pillow talk, thought it might be a little different to what you're after) :smirks:

Chelle's A Song of Companionship here http://wraithbait.com/viewstory.php?sid=12029&warning=12

[folavril.livejournal.com]

I forgot, this too

http://toft-froggy.livejournal.com/220548.html Talking Dirty - the title says it all! Both are McShep.

[wanted-a-pony.livejournal.com]

Oh please, don't be ashamed! "Listening" to characters direct each other, reinforce what they like, beg for what they want, & specify in abandoned & filthy detail what they're feeling is smokin' hot! I'm convinced this is a not-uncommon like/love--we're certainly not the only people I've "met" who get off on it. After all, don't most people have at least a few things, said in a certain tone of voice, which will reboot their higher brain functions every. single. time?

It's not exactly what you requested, but sort of a related-kink fic is at http://www.trickster.org/kass/speech.html. (John wants Rodney not to talk so he can.... ;-)

[roxy-palace.livejournal.com]

OH! Bless your heart! Thank you very much! I've read Companionship, but can always read it again. It's great. The other one is totally new to me though!

[roxy-palace.livejournal.com]

*After all, don't most people have at least a few things, said in a certain tone of voice, which will reboot their higher brain functions every. single. time?*

SO TRUE! Um...for me it's...well...*blushes furiously*, Um..."Take it." usually does it for me...Um...Gawd. *hides behind hands*

I'm looking forward to reading the fic you rec! Thanks!

[roxy-palace.livejournal.com]

Oh so freakin' hawt! I love this story!

[wanted-a-pony.livejournal.com]

Zoh my gawd I'd never read "A Song of Companionship" before — DAMN that's hot! Don't know about you but that's... uh... well, let's say it strokes my buttons juuuust right.... ::deep breath:: ~ ::bright blush::

Oh yeah, I could read that again. A few dozen times. ;-)

[roxy-palace.livejournal.com]

Gawd! Tell me about it. I think I burst a blood vessel or two trying to imagine John saying all that stuff. Holy shit.

It kind of sneaks up on you too, doesn't it. It's unexpected. I might have to read it again tonight...*is crimson with shame*

[wanted-a-pony.livejournal.com]

Hey, I really enjoyed our little conversation when you asked for Pillow Talk fics at the SGAGenreFinders comm. With the notion that you may also read SG1 fics, I thought I'd share a bit of naughtiness that really, um, caught my attention when I read it. This is from "Housewarming" at http://bertybertle.livejournal.com/28250.html . "He" is Daniel Jackson, "I" is Jack O'Neill, & this is their first encounter:

I’m going insane, trying to hold still, trying to be patient and let him set the pace. It’s so hard I could almost weep with it.

He pulls my jeans and shorts down my thighs, trapping me, and then moves a little closer, shuffling on his knees. He lifts his sweet mouth.

“Feed me,” he murmurs.

My bottle thumps to the floor and I’m shaking so hard, I can hardly find my dick to aim it. He opens his mouth obediently when I put a hand in his hair, then I slip my cock between his lips, feeding it to him like he asked, a little at a time until he’s got as much of me as he can take.

I can't say that I have a particular word or phrase that always does it for me. That particular heart-pounding, eyes-rolled-back, ::gasp:: as a wave of lust rolls over & knocks me off my feet is usually a product of careful, slow buildup *or* a "sneak attack" of some fast, filthy action that just happens to hit my mood exactly right at that moment.

However. That slightly-submissive image of a kneeling man & the quiet, confident Feed me? That has the potential to be a favorite for a long time. Just wanted to share.... :-D